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Haha! Got you with a DA snow ball!

It's the start of..... Snow Ball Fight 2005-2006 !!!!
One rule to this game....
You can't hit someone who has already hit you!
Now... go out there and get as many people as you can, before they get you!

I got you first so you can't get me back!
Well, start hitting!!

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Keep on Rockin in my world!...
Yes..
thats right...
its mine...
I called dibs...

Hope all is well with you love!

Thanks for the watch.

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I demand dominance, especially if You demand submission.

Thanks for the fav and the watch.

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Hate the government? Don’t pay federal taxes or join the military. They’re nothing without them.

Thank you, by the way, for spreading the word about how fantastic my writing is. THAT is the best compliment I could ever get!

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GauzyDreams

"No pessimist ever discovered the secret of the stars, or sailed to an uncharted land, or opened a new doorway for the human spirit." -Helen Keller

Incentive to write is always good!

Now you've got me pondering that suggestion for "I"

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"Logic is overrated"- Gothika

Thank you for the fav! You give me incentive to write

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GauzyDreams

"No pessimist ever discovered the secret of the stars, or sailed to an uncharted land, or opened a new doorway for the human spirit." -Helen Keller

Thanks for the watch.

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No problem. I loved the story, and eagerly await the next installment.

Fair is fair. You can take a spin through my gallery if you like, leave a few comments. I'm about to go poke through yours.

Ta!

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"Logic is overrated"- Gothika

Thank you for stalking me. I love you.

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"Hell till we die, die and go to hell."
-E.C

I wouldn't exactly call my writing fabulous, but thanks. I'm going through a bit of a block stage at present (I have Finals at University) but if you want to leave comments on pieces already in my gallery, go right ahead

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"Logic is overrated"- Gothika

IM STALKING YOUR FABULOUS WRITING!! FEAR ME!!

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If i spin around five times and jump once, the walls have ears

Mua ha ha!! ^_^ I win!

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"Behind every great fortune there is a crime" ~Balzac

Oh, I should think we could let you have a gander at a log or two. It's just the two of us who play together although there are side-canons with other friends of ours. (Tayley-Chan is a great artist, by the way, and some of the pieces in her gallery are Father's Pride based. I don't know how to do the linking thing, but tayley-chan.deviantart.com)

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"Logic is overrated"- Gothika

I understand completely about "necessary changes for on-line play." I have been in an rp community since 2001 that plays VtM. They had been going for about 2 yrs before I joined and we are still going strong now.

Knowing what you are talking about helps alot in understanding your pieces.

Just a suggestion... in case others stumble over your pieces, include that information in any of the pieces based off the game you play.

I would be interested in taking a peek at your game if that is possible?

Tayley-Chan's a good friend of mine, another DA user, and another VtM player. She's dubbed herself the bastard lovechild of Malkav, and she MAY have a point. Father's Pride is an online rp we spend a LOT of time on. It takes most of the VtM rules, with some necessary changes for online work.

Canon was originally hers, based on a short story known as "Father's Pride" but since we've been playing online since November 03, we've made so many alterations that the canon is now ours.

Sorry for the confusion!

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"Logic is overrated"- Gothika

Tayley-Chan's a good friend of mine, another DA user, and another VtM player. She's dubbed herself the bastard lovechild of Malkav, and she MAY have a point. Father's Pride is an online rp we spend a LOT of time on. It takes most of the VtM rules, with some necessary changes for online work.

Canon was originally hers, based on a short story known as "Father's Pride" but since we've been playing online since November 03, we've made so many alterations that the canon is now ours.

Sorry for the confusion!

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"Logic is overrated"- Gothika

I noticed something about some of the random stops I made in your gallery and so I have to ask...

who or what is... "Tayley-Chan's and my Father's Pride canon"???

Your comments are more than welcome, as was your watch.

Don't ever worry about the "length" of comments, as a matter of fact, there is a growing "revolution" here on DA about making more constructive comments! So yours, where you took a moment and put thought into them were most appreciated!!

I have to mention to you, whenever someone watches me, I always try to go take a look at something in their gallery and leave a comment, so your request was something I was planning on doing anyway.

I am simply a novice writer myself and so it is more than worth my "time", though life is completely hectic right now (taking a peek at my latest journal would explain). I will keep your comments and your watch in my "un-read" list until I find the time to come take a walk through your gallery.

If there is something specific you would like me to take a look at, I would be more than happy to.

If there is every anything I can help you with, feel free to ask.

I know this is getting long, but I have to mention:

It's funny that you mention it being worth my "time". I actually actively support two critiquing communities here on DA (~onewordatatime & ~WeCritique.. the first by shameless promotion, the second by being a member) and am a member of ~writers-adoption (as an adopter), wherein writers choose adopters to offer advice and support to each other about their writings.

If you are interested in these or any other communities on DA.. I suggest you visit *suture as they have an entire list of writing communities here on DA.

(and if you aren't interested, then by all means, ignore all that and look for my comments soon. )

Anyway, thanks soooo much for the watch and comments, us VtM fans have to stick together.

Did a bunch of editing today. All my deviations now possess properly spaced paragraphs and, to the best of my knowledge, very few typos. I'd say none, but...No one's perfect

Alright, all. Listen up...please ^_^ I did some editing on the deviation once known as "Untitled". It's now known as "Ashes to Ashes", fits into Canon again, and SHOULD be easier to read now that I know how to make paragraphs properly.

shure you can use the spider pic i dont mind like ya said !! ya just give me credit for the picu!

Yes I do I went to MQP MacDonald Drive Jr High and am currently at Gonzaga Its entirely possible that weve met

I have to ask... I think I've met you before but I can't remember where... Do you live in Newfoundland?

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Keep on Rockin in my world!...
Yes..
thats right...
its mine...
I called dibs...

I have to ask... I think I've met you before but I can't remember where... Do you live in Newfoundland?

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Keep on Rockin in my world!...
Yes..
thats right...
its mine...
I called dibs...